Target Audience feedback

So in the past week I have been inviting people in to watch our half baked 'masterpiece' and asking them to criticise what they dont like and what needs changing. Just going to bullet point some of the feedback -

- Need to use a tint (black and white?) to mix up the shots
- Change some of the shots around because they dont fit in the right part of the shot.
- use more slow motion shots

So looking at these three points i can gather that we need to look at the presentaition of the clips, such as speed, positioning in the video and effects, rather than the actual footage itself, however we are praised for how well synced it is, and how into the video we were, including actors (thanks jamie..) so anyway we are off to go on work on that abd i'll update soon.